selfie writing

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In NZ there was a boy named Mackade Brown every dark night he would sneak street to street on top of the unsuspecting busses. Then once he got to a isolated area he would DOODLE! He would bring a big bag and open it and have SPRAY PAINT AND DOODLE it was never possible to guess the madness he would paint on those walls. There was color after color would never stop there even doing wacky painting and goofy art. After this weird hobby got the attention of cops when they got call by a resident of a local dairy owner complaining about his wall got covered in very weird, wacky drawings including animals, war disney, etc and all things that were Mack knew in his head. So that’s why this poster is a thing and soon I will draw ALL over this! (can't wait to!)

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In America there was a young mischievous, cheeky boy who goes to do what he always does and what he does to have fun but on the way down to search for fun he was like a blood hound chasing its prey. But on his way to a local fair he overhears people talking down a dark alleyway the shady figures talking about ruining the fair by shooting down a big balloon which will fall and inside is a LOT of fireworks it will fall down on the unsuspecting citizens. “Hey guys that kid mighta heard something” says one of the 3 shadey punks. Creeping slowly towards the boy in a split second he released...RUN he rushed down the street trying to lose the punks. Eventually when he made distinct ahead he blended into the crowd with his head down and hoodie up. Eventually I head down to the police department and soon enough they soon enough caught the baddies spotted them while they were midway aiming at the bright balloon and when he rushed to a circus IT WAS CLOSED… the local park….CLOSED the zoo…CLOSED. For a moment he got frustrated but calmed down after releasing he DID have fun with the bad guys. He also was happy and still filled with adrenaline.