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100 word story using these words WIDE ORANGE CROCODILE WITHIN COLLAPSED
One day 2 brave men set out to find what lurked within the streams of the Amazon. The collapsed trees and wide plains all in the deadly Amazon. While calmly going into a giant stream. They noticed some of the algae and plastic bottles which made them disgusted. so they clambered out of their bulky boat and quickly hopped into cleaning up this disgraceful trash. While they collected the trash in the distance was a rare species of a orange crocodile. It lurked out of the water looking where the voices could be coming from. It swam towards the men and it's loud grunting made them jump and they sprinted away.
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