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I walked into the kitchen to sniff out the secret stash of food that my sister stole carefully making sure she can't see me. I look around and I notice there's a slight gap between the wall and the fridge. I just couldn't eat something so old. There was old food pile slowing rotting away. I find Harper, my sister and say “ WHAT ARE YOU EATING, is there something wrong with it or is it you?”
“WHAT ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT” Harper screamed at me. I showed her the nasty stash and she eats it… I i immediately throw up on the spot.
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