Tuesday 6 June 2017

Viking girl - show don't tell

Viking girl Say - Looks - Actions       
On the day before christmas this was the WORST to a girl named abby.She  was a young girl who disliked christmas she thought it was dullest and dumbest she would rather read encyclopedias for a week. She sticks her tongue out at the Santas in the mall. SO she looks around in stores to find ideas for a REPLACEMENT for christmas like pony birthday or CAKE WEEK… 3 hours later she gets home on christmas eve in a viking costume and says “NO MORE DUMB CHRISTMAS” at the top of lungs. She screamed so loud it echoed throughout the street. Her mum comes to the doorway and says to her daughter “what are doing” she says, the girl says with her arms crossed  saying “we're Celebrating VIKING DAY”… there was a pause…  “ honey I know you hate christmas but give it a try” mum says she thinks… deeply “FINE but I better get the pretty unicorn rocking horse!!! If not I will draw on all of our walls”  and shuts her bedroom door. The next day she ran towards the once hated christmas tree and ripped the wrapping paper and opened her present... She got what she wanted. A UNICORN ROCKING HORSE! She now enjoys the viking day, uh I mean CHRISTMAS But STILL would rather call it viking day.

By Mack

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