Christmas Metaphor poem

The Christmas lights in the night are stars twinkling in the night sky.
The reindeer on the slay are planes souring through the sky. 
The snow falling is present landing under the tree.

writing

5.12.16
W.a.lt write a senses poem with metaphors
The moon is a cheesy version of earth
Triangles are giant mountains covered with snow
The sea is a blue paint bucket pushed over
A volcano is a coke with TONS of mentos